In Read Write inc we have been looking at Balloon for Grandad. We spotted the alliteration used and wanted to make our own descriptions of the desert.
Ben: Camels climbed sand mountains and aardvarks ate all the ants. the scorching sand made the desert hot.
Zain: Slithering snakes slithered along and the pointy pyramids stood in lazily in the sand.
Charlie: Snakes slithered on the scorching sand and scary spiders spat poison.
Cian: Dangerous desert pirates dug in the ground for treasure. Pointy pyramids stood on the highest sand.
Rose: Cuddly camels munched and crunched their lunch. The lazy ladybirds flew everywhere.
Alex: Crazy camels lazily sun bathed in the scorching sand.
Kye: Poisonous spiders were spitting poison. Skinny snakes were slithering across the smooth sand.
Harrision: Crazy camels were flying across the sand and pointy pyramids were collapsing. Advenurous aardvarks were eating ants with barbecue sauce.
Stella: Sticky snakes slithered on the smooth sand.
Munna: Snappy scorpions were sneaking along.
Benjamin: Angry ants were crawling.
Zara: Pointy pyramids stood in the sun.